CJ 万维市（wanweishi）

或许不应该怪你，因为用这张地图制作这样大一座城市确实不太容易。但事实是，巍峨的群山抹灭了CBD的威严，而山脚简单的处理方式使得城市与环境难以取得协调。第五张图如果细细观察就会发现，在建筑的侵蚀下，山峰的走形到最后必须突转急下才能抵达地面，这在现实中是不可能存在的（极易引发泥石流和雪崩）。您真的不应该选这张地图的。

Good start so far! I like the harbour area as well as the skyline. On top of that, your work with the highways looks quite professional, good job!

What I dislike are the steep roads in the hilly districts. Why did you not make serpentines instead? Or tunnels for the railways? That would have taken a bit more time, but it would make the city look a lot more realistic.

良好的开始为止！我喜欢海港地区以及天际线。除此之外，你与高速公路的工作看起来很专业，好工作！

我不喜欢的是在丘陵地区的陡峭的道路。你为什么不做蛇纹石？或隧道的铁路？这将需要一些时间，但它会使城市看起来更多的现实。

Great post modern city, I always have a hard time deciding where to begin and end the man made vs natural shoreline in a city. interesting use/placement for the airport, non intrusive but with its own small "commercial" center as is to be expected.