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CJ 和岩·洛恩华 ~ Heyan: Lornenhua

My first serious work.I had to stop building because of the archived crashes.

  1. Schechtel
    Schechtel
    5/5,
    It is a pity that there is no satellite plan of the city with the layout of streets, And so everything is beautiful and realistic
  2. Inan
    Inan
    5/5,
    I like the skyline and the ground level pictures! In China people are still playing the game it seems. :-)
  3. nicknick
    nicknick
    5/5,
    I like what i see. Very well done.

    The result is realistic and you have shown a good sense regarding organising structures and handling light / centerpieces and compositions.

    What i 'd would be happy to see would be more aerial views and more general views to be able to focis also on larger scale and city scale. All in all i like what i see and i would definitely want to see more.
  4. Ammar Shaker
    Ammar Shaker
    5/5,
    Very Realistic, good job
    1. Heyan
      Author's Response
      Thank you for your affirmation, I will work harder in the future.
  5. Nairobi's light and dark
    Nairobi's light and dark
    5/5,
    很棒,五星好评,天际线处理非常好,RHM需要再精进一下,风格很清爽
    1. Heyan
      Author's Response
      感谢好评。RHM的确需要改进,对这个还手生。
  6. daochunhan
    daochunhan
    5/5,
    确实不错群主,有些方面确实让人眼前一亮,高楼群的叠加很协调。希望你能多发一些空拍图,而不是只局限于天际线的仰拍
    1. Heyan
      Author's Response
      如果没崩档我会发空拍的。但前提是我得进的了存档拍图。。。总之,感谢您的肯定和建议。
  7. kipate
    kipate
    3/5,
    Three stars :)
    I actually think that the city deserves some serious description. You showed just some pictures, but you didn't describe the city. Without any description, I, as a reader, will not associate any emotions with your city. What is the history, why did the mayor (=you) build things as he did, and so on.

    Also, what bugs me more, is that some parts have been built a bit carelessly. For example, the highways often have these ups and downs. With some more patience, you could have build a smooth elevated highway.

    I do actually like your skyline a lot, it is well balanced, the buildings are not too tall, and the height of the buildings does not change from 5m to 250m within one block. That's a good job :)

    The way you decorated your city is also quite creative, I like the use of the Gateway Arch, and your plazas look fine, too.
    1. Heyan
      Author's Response
      Thank you for your advice. I will carefully sort out the pictures I posted.There's really a problem with the highway. I will try to improve it next time.