Your city is very nice-especially the beachfront. I could nitpick some things about the city, but it is still better than any of my current city journals.
I do have some recommendations for your for the journal itself, though. Try putting more [spoiler] tabs in the city journal, and explain the pictures. Not only would the city journal be easier to read, but it would be more interesting.
Also, try to think of a slight backstory as an introduction for your city journal. When was your city founded? Does it have any core features (other than tourism)? Does your city hold any major political power? Try to add things like that.
All in all, your city is pretty good. Keep up the good work.