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CJ Manhattan Lakes City

Harlem Slopes - First Suburb of Many

  1. kipate
    kipate
    5/5,
    I will give you the five stars, because your city together with the detailed journal part have been quite impressive to me!

    I like that you stayed rather consistent and did not mix up too many different styles within the place. Also, Harlem Slopes looks truly realistic to me, you added a lot of embellishments to achieve this, good job :)

    Given the few views of the main city, I would like to give you some advice: Try to improve the natural recreation sites:

    Forests never consist of only trees all over, there are clearings, for example. So you could mix e.g. grass plazas with forest areas.

    The wooden area alongside the shore (in front of the main CBD with all the skyscrapers) deserves a better use for walking. I would say that any city in the world would have some more esplanades there, not only nature. I have seen the marinas over there, nonetheless I think there could be added some more stuff ;)

    Maybe take a look at the journals of other people to get an impression of what could be added ;)
  2. afteq
    afteq
    4/5,
    Very nicely constructed.
  3. benhur1967
    benhur1967
    5/5,
    Very good! It deserves 5 stars!
  4. brendonwright1989
    brendonwright1989
    5/5,
    I like your style. I'm looking forward to seeing more as you update this CJ.
    1. Jake Wade
      Author's Response
      Wow! Thanks Brendon.