Good work on the journal, I like your futuristic vibe! I love how you ordered the layout of the city, well planned! But sometimes, the choice of buildings looks a bit randomized, which is confusing given the named order of the streets in general. Also, you may reconsider your micromanagement. Maybe add some more (sense-making) decorations.
Fine work on the models, if I may say so. Do they obey the standards for mods regarding the size? If so, why not publish them? ;)